It really needs some sound.

If you want to go with a silent animation try a different style. It Is a great begining. You might just want to work over the story line a little more. And shorten some of the dead spots.

the most contemporary piec ive seen

I love what I see. This is the mostt tymly ng piece I have seen since 9/11 .

very well done

But not very well thought out.This is the begining to a great game. I would say work on the controls, graphics, and sound. The idea is there don't stop now. hope to see more!