It really needs some sound.
If you want to go with a silent animation try a different style. It Is a great begining. You might just want to work over the story line a little more. And shorten some of the dead spots.
It really needs some sound.
If you want to go with a silent animation try a different style. It Is a great begining. You might just want to work over the story line a little more. And shorten some of the dead spots.
the most contemporary piec ive seen
I love what I see. This is the mostt tymly ng piece I have seen since 9/11 .
nice work
The sound thing really needs to be worked out. the rest is is pure style play with some different ideas. That should be easy for you. keep'em coming.
Thanks for the postive input man.
This is great.
I dont know that you should grow out of this. the last reviw admits to smoking and still does not get why pot laws are counterprodutive and need to be abolished.
good idea
you should work on your camera angles and get in closer.Then add some better sound, that could really make it move.
Excellent, I love these shows
Keep it up. I hope to see many more.
This is a funny idea
Your story telling could use some work. Maybe try to shoten it up, and add a some humor maybe some remark about certain companies.
Well, as I said before, I was working with the script I was given. I don't understand much about the content, only had an idea, and just tried to bring the humour out visually. Since my understanding is limited, and it was a short time span, I didn't have much time to research, just focused on finishing it. :) I see what you mean, and I agree...there definally could be improvements, if the time was given for it. Thanks for the suggestions and review.
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